A focused debrief on your Round 1 submission of DIM (was SLEEP 2), with the renamed-scent context, the current sample, and direction for the next round. A standing invitation for a free interpretation of the brief sits at the end of the debrief.
The final Phase 1 lineup is now fixed as follows:
The renaming is meaningful: the storytelling each scent is built around has shifted with the name. This is why we are flagging it at the top of the document, before the per-submission notes. Olfactive feedback on each Round 1 sample will appear in the DEBRIEF section under each card. The briefs the perfumers should now be working against are the renamed ones.
A warm, dimly lit fabric space — skin, linen, and a soft floral presence resting in still air. A floral that feels closer to skin than bloom, capturing the quiet flow of unconscious time. (Now under DIM: the light of dusk and golden hour, the threshold before the lamps are switched on.)
“A subdued floral presence resting in still air, where cool transparency and quiet warmth meet — skin wrapped in linen under fading light.”
Thank you for the sample. The refined opening and the depth of the rich natural palette came through, and we tried it with real interest. To bring the original intention of the fragrance into sharper focus, we would like to ask for a few specific adjustments.
The mood we are aiming at is a quietly sustained one, woven from a refined, soft leather/suede nuance in the register of Frassai's Ajedrez, the dense woody sweetness of tonka bean, and the velvety softness of gardenia. In the current sample, the refinement specific to tonka bean is somewhat buried, and through the opening and the middle a strong, sharp, fruit-leaning impression — closer to cassis or blackcurrant — sits at the front. We would like to lift that impression away and recover the original transparent, delicate texture. Please consider the following carefully.
Alongside this directed feedback, we would also be very glad to receive a second interpretation of DIM from you under complete creative freedom. Your own reading of the brief, unconstrained by the notes above. We would treat it as an additional, parallel submission rather than a replacement for the reformulation. If your schedule allows, we would be delighted to see where you take it.
Thank you, as always, for the care and sensibility in your work. We are looking forward to the next sample.
Thanks for the work to date. What we have seen sits close to what we are looking for, and the gap to the next round should be a narrow one rather than a wide one. Looking forward to the DEBRIEF notes landing with your team.
Best,
Kelvin